So, I have finally looked over my draft essay, and think that it isn't bad. I did not really get into many details, but I think that that is alright. I do talk a lot about ideals and ideas, not facts, which is something new to me. However, the ideals I discussed in my essay are things I believe very strongly in, such as leadership and service. I feel that they are the corner stones to any great society, ours included. I know that I rambled a lot throughout my essay, and did not present many concrete ideas that are easy to wrap my head around; it took quite a bit of work to make my essay, but I enjoyed writing it and hope that it isn't to bad.
Anyway, in other news, I have determined that mixing an argumentative essay, one that tries to convince you of something with a winding, personal essay is very effective for me. Difficult to write, as mentioned above, but it makes me feel like I accomplished something in my writing rather than just mumbling on and on like I am doing now. However, I am in my last 4 minutes of my 12-hour Naval Study Tours for this week, and would like to celebrate. Prepare to cheer, cheer (yay) LOCK IT UP! Enjoy your weekend, everyone, and remember that the following is a message from the Surgeon General:
Drag like White Lightning and keep your covers out of the microwave. (May cause cancer)
NC/ STANTON
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